Peer Review - Melvin's WA1

After I read Melvin's writing assignment 1, i found that it is generally logical, well organized and smooth flowing to me as I understand what he is trying to express in the essay. I found the essay is quite interesting because it shows some statistic about the contribution of nature to us and how climate change affect us. Such as "oceans alone able to absorb about 2 gigatonnes of carbon a year, and reducing deforestation and forest degradation able to cut carbon emission up to 1 gigatonne a year”. After reading the introduction paragraph, it gives me a rough idea that the essay is going to discuss about the ways to fight current global warming using integrated approach from both nature and people. The two main arguments in this essay is how natural ecosystem saves life and sustain livelihood and hidden benefits that nature has to offer for people without destroying it.From each paragraph, it does give a quite clear idea and provide some supporting sentences and the statistic that he used also support his idea on that paragraph. For the conclusion, he emphasized the idea of the essay which make it more clear. Only the citation of the essay is not properly done and no references in included in the essay. Thus, it might be quite difficult for me if I want to find out more information on this topic.